?

Log in

No account? Create an account

Previous Entry | Next Entry

J.R.R. Tolkien's next book

I was tipped off by parrot_knight to the fact that I actually owned one of J.R.R. Tolkien's lesser-known works, which was not published under his own name. He translated it from French, although the French text was itself a translation; apparently his manuscript notes indicate that he was using a dictionary to cross-check vocabulary with the original text (which was in a language he did not know all that well). Below the cut is the complete Tolkien translation as it appears in my 1966 copy of the book, presumably cut about a bit by his co-editors; an account of the whole affair is to be published very soon.

Jonah

Jonah rebels against his mission
1
1 The word of Yahweh was addressed to Jonah son of Amittai: 2 "Up!" he said, "Go to Nineveh, the great city, and inform them that their wickedness has become known to me." 3 Jonah decided to run away from Yahweh, and to go to Tarshish. He went down to Joppa and found a ship bound for Tarshish; he paid his fare and went aboard, to go with them to Tarshish, to get away from Yahweh. 4 But Yahweh unleashed a violent wind on the sea, and there was such a great storm at sea that the ship threatened to break up. 5 The sailors took fright, and each of them called on his own god, and to lighten the ship they threw the cargo overboard. Jonah, however, had gone down below and lain down in the hold and fallen fast asleep. 6 The boatswain came to him and said, "What do you mean by sleeping? Get up! Call on your god! Perhaps he will spare us a thought, and not leave us to die." 7 Then they said to each other, "Come on, let us draw lots to find out who is responsible for bringing this evil on us." So they cast lots, and the lot fell on Jonah. 8 Then they said to him, "Tell us, what is your business? Where do you come from? What is your country? What is your nationality?" 9 He replied, "I am Hebrew, and I worship Yahweh, the God of heaven, who made the sea and the land." 10 The sailors were seized with terror at this and said, "What have you done?" They knew that he was trying to escape from Yahweh, because he had told them so. 11 They then said, "What are we to do with you, to make the sea grow calm for us?" For the sea was growing rougher and rougher. 12 He replied, "Take me and throw me into the sea, and then it will grow calm for you. For I can see it is my fault this violent storm has happened to you." 13 The sailors rowed hard in an effort to reach he shore, but in vain, since the sea grew still rougher for them. 14 They then called on Yahweh and said, "O Yahweh, do not let us perish for taking this man's life; do not hold us guilty." 14 And taking hold of Jonah they threw him into the sea; and the sea grew calm again. 15 At this the men were seized with dread of Yahweh; they offered a sacrifice to Yahweh and made vows.

Jonah is saved
2
1 Yahweh had arranged that a great fish should be there to swallow Jonah; and Jonah remained in the belly of the fish for three days and three nights. 2 From the belly of the fish he prayed to Yahweh, his God; he said:

3 "Out of my distress I cried to Yahweh
and he answered me;
from the belly of Sheol I cried,
and you have heard my voice.
4 You cast me into the abyss, into the heart of the sea,
and the flood surrounded me.
All your waves, your billows,
washed over me.
5 And I said: I am cast out
from your sight.
How shall I ever look again
on your holy Temple?
6 The waters surrounded me right to my throat,
the abyss was all around me.
The seaweed was wrapped around my head
7 at the roots of the mountains.
I went down into the countries underneath the earth,
to the people of the past.
But you lifted my life from the pit,
Yahweh, my God.
8 While my soul was fainting within me,
I remembered Yahweh,
and my prayer came before you
into your holy Temple.
9 Those who serve worthless idols
forfeit the grace that was theirs.

10 "But I, with a song of praise,
will sacrifice to you.
The vow I have made, I will fulfill.
Salvation comes from Yahweh."
11 Yahweh spoke to the fish, which then vomited Jonah on to the shore.

The conversion of Nineveh and God's pardon
3
1 The word of Yahweh was addressed a second time to Jonah: 2 'Up!" he said, "Go to Nineveh, the great city, and preach to them as I told you to." 3 Jonah set out and went to Nineveh in obedience to the word of Yahweh. Now Nineveh was a city great beyond compare: it took three days to cross it. 4 Jonah went on into the city, making a day's journey. He preached in these words, "Only forty days more and Nineveh is going to be destroyed." 5 And the people of Nineveh believed in God; they proclaimed a fast and put on sackcloth, from the greatest to the least. 6 The news reached the king of Nineveh, who rose from his throne, took off his robe, put on sackcloth and sat down in ashes. 7 A proclamation was then promulgated throughout Nineveh, by decree of the king and his ministers, as follows: "Men and beasts, herds and flocks, are to taste nothing; they must not eat, they must not drink water. 8 All are to put on sackcloth and call on God with all their might; and let everyone renounce his evil behaviour and the wicked things he has done. 9 Who knows if God will not change his mind and relent, if he will not renounce his burning wrath, so that we do not perish?" 10 God saw their efforts to renounce their evil behaviour. And God relented; he did not inflict on them the disaster which he had threatened.

The grievance of the prophet and God's answer
4
1 Jonah was very indignant at this; he fell into a rage. 2 He prayed to Yahweh and said, "Ah! Yahweh is not this just as I said would happen when I was still at home? That was why I went and fled to Tarshish: I knew that you were a God of tenderness and compassion, slow to anger, rich in graciousness, relenting from evil. 3 So now Yahweh, please take away my life, for I might as well be dead as go on living." 4 Yahweh replied, "Are you right to be angry?" 5 Jonah then went out of the city and sat down to the east of the city. There he made himself a shelter and sat under it in the shade, to see what would happen to the city. 6 Then Yahweh God arranged that a castor-oil plant should grow up over Jonah to give shade for his head and soothe his ill-humour; Jonah was delighted with the castor-oil plat. 7 But at dawn the next day, God arranged that a worm should attack the castor-oil plant - and it withered. 8 Next, when the sun rose, God arranged that there should be a scorching east wind; the sun beat down so hard on Jonah's head that he was overcome and begged for death, saying, "I might as well be dead as go on living." 9 God said to Jonah, "Are you right to be angry about the castor-oil plant?" He replied, "I have every right to be angry, to the point of death." 10 Yahweh replied, "You are only upset about a castor-oil plant which cost you no labour, which you did not grow, which sprouted in a night and has perished in a night. 11 And am I not to feel sorry for Nineveh, the great city, in which there are more than a hundred and twenty thousand people who cannot tell their right hand from their left, to say nothing of all the animals?"

Comments

( 6 comments — Leave a comment )
liadnan
Jun. 11th, 2009 09:25 am (UTC)
He was always a bit diffident about his involvement with the Jerusalem Bible, for some reason. I'd forgotten it used "Yahweh" to translate the tetragrammaton, which is now once again a nono.

Shame Pauline Baynes is no longer with us, she could have illustrated it.

Have often wondered if he knew Ronald Knox.

Was really surprised to see, when in Foyles the other day, that alongside all the Silmarillion bits and pieces he had actually done a version of the Volsung Saga proper.
unwholesome_fen
Jun. 11th, 2009 01:08 pm (UTC)
Is it a "nono"? I thought it was (as ever) more a "yesno" (as in "go not to the elves for advice, for they will answer both yes and no") - i.e. there are many different opinions, and the matter will (and can) never be resolved.
liadnan
Jun. 11th, 2009 01:15 pm (UTC)
Sorry, should have been a bit clearer: the use of "Yahweh" or indeed any other reconstruction of what "YHWH" was actually supposed to 'be', as opposed to, as per tradition, replacing it with eg "Lord" is banned at least so far as the Vatican is concerned. Congregation for the Doctrine of the Faith ruling last summer. Which means lots of post-VII hymns are Not On (no great loss so far as I'm concerned but YMMV) and also means it has to come out of the lectionary (and the RC lectionary in England, though not the US, is indeed based on this very translation).
unwholesome_fen
Jun. 11th, 2009 04:01 pm (UTC)
Who's running the CDF since uncle Joe got promoted?
liadnan
Jun. 11th, 2009 04:08 pm (UTC)
..checks... Cardinal Levada.
unwholesome_fen
Jun. 11th, 2009 05:10 pm (UTC)
Hmm, a bit of digging suggests the CDF must have been enforcing an earlier decision:

http://www.vatican.va/roman_curia/congregations/ccdds/documents/rc_con_ccdds_doc_20010507_liturgiam-authenticam_en.html

[see 41(c)]
( 6 comments — Leave a comment )

Latest Month

October 2019
S M T W T F S
  12345
6789101112
13141516171819
20212223242526
2728293031  

Tags

Page Summary

Powered by LiveJournal.com
Designed by yoksel